Puppet Without Master - Not Convinced

Creo que es hora ya de publicar algo, ¿no?. Bueno, pero antes muy buenos días a todos y a todas los lectores y lectoras de este rinconcito apartado de la gran red que viene siendo Internet. Hoy toca algo en la lengua en que Los Beatles cantaban, en concreto, una canción.

Como ya dije, este blog, además de para dejaros soprendidamente sorprendidos (nótese la ironía) es, además, una manera de mejorar un poco mi manera de escribir poesía, con tal de hacer canciones para mi grupo. Bueno, pues aquí está la primera canción escrita. La empecé hace tiempo, pero no la había acabado. El siguiente paso es conseguir sacar una buena melodía para la guitarra, el bajo y demás. Es sencilla, pero espero que os guste.


Not Convinced

See me, see how I'm breaking
cuz' I don't know if you're here with me.
Hear my voice, I am not convinced.
Are we real or am I just like dreaming?

Feel me, tell me if I'm breathing,
cause I don't know if my heart is beating.
Hear my voice, I am not convinced,
Are we trust or are you just like kidding?

[Estribillo]

I don't believe you,
cause I can't feel you.
Is there, behind your cool breathing,
someone that I can show my feelings?

I don't trust you,
cause I can't see you.
Is there, behind your sweet darkness,
a heart that can have true feelings?

[Estribillo]

Hey you, I can see you crawling,
like a snake, but really close to me,
See my face, I am not convinced,
are you real or am I just like stupid?

[Estribillo]

I don't believe you,
cause I can't feel you.
Is there, behind your cool breathing,
someone that I can show my feelings?

I don't trust you,
cause I can't see you.
Is there, behind your sweet darkness,
a heart that can have true feelings?

[Estribillo]

I don't believe you,
cause I can't feel you.
Is there, behind your cool breathing,
someone that I can show my feelings?

I can't protect you,
cause I can't find you.
Are you behind your sweet darkness?
Can't I really have true feelings?